Essays That Worked
The essays are a place to show us who you are and who you’ll be in our community.
It’s a chance to add depth to something that is important to you and tell the admissions committee more about your background or goals. Below you’ll find selected examples of essays that “worked,” as nominated by our admissions committee. In each of these essays, students were able to share stories from their everyday lives to reveal something about their character, values, and life that aligned with the culture and values at Hopkins.
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These selections represent just a few examples of essays we found impressive and helpful during the past admissions cycle. We hope these essays inspire you as you prepare to compose your own personal statements. The most important thing to remember is to be original as you share your own story, thoughts, and ideas with us.
Essays That Worked
Balancing Life; A Life of Balance
See how Jade uses their essay to highlight the importance of balance in their approach to life.
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Be the Salt of the Earth
In her essay, Maria uses salt as a driver to examine her growing awareness of communities and perspectives different from her own.
Read Maria’s Essay
Where Math Collides With Art
Anthony explores the beginning of his interest in mathematics, diving into the many classrooms and personal experiences that created and strengthened it.
Read Anthony’s Essay
A Splash of Color
Emily’s essay uses a variety of personal experiences to highlight how she takes risks, explores new passions, and learns about what excites and inspires her.
Read Emily’s Essay
Building a Universe
Through his interest in worldbuilding, Shotaro is able to highlight skills and perspectives that will allow him to seamlessly engage in that type of interconnected study.
Read Shotaro’s Essay
Conquering
Faith’s essay introduces us to a challenge faced by many—a fear of public speaking.
Read Faith’s EssayMore essays that worked
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